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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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Here's your poem

09/15/2011

Here’s your poem
9 15 2011

I was messaging with you one night
Things were going great, I felt more than alright
I felt this connection with you
I was holding back a bit, it all seemed too good to be true

We have similar music taste
You like bon jovi too, this is great
You enjoy Disney
And we shared our poetry
Describing things to me
Through your words, this blind man could see

We shared stories of our past
You had saved the most painful story for last
You had ask me not to tell anyone
I mentally comforted you, told you I wouldn’t tell anyone
And through it all I did not judge, I just listened
I was concerned about your mother, and asked how she was, again and again
I was being a great friend

You started getting more flirty with me
I held you back, I wanted to take things slowly
Knowing your past, I wanted to be careful, I didn’t want to hurt you
I was having feelings for you
I was starting to plan a trip to see you
I wanted to make everything ok for you
I wanted to be with you
You said you wanted to be with me too
I was even thinking to ask you to a family party in December, it’s true

I came home from dinner to a mess
I failed the love test
You admitted to me that you have a boyfriend
A part of me will always wonder what could have been but I guess this is the end

I told you good guys finish last if at all
Maybe its that your boyfriend is greater than I’ll ever be. that’s all

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awwwww i wanna cry! this poem is amazing

[~Melissa~|0 likes] [|reply]

Aww. I hate how nice guys get kicked to the curb. Happens to girls too unfortunately.

[»Scarlett's Mommy«Star|0 likes] [|reply]

nice - did you ever see that girl again???

[The Dreaming Wife |0 likes] [|reply]

Is this related to something that happened in real life? *big hugs*

[already gone.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

The one that you asked me to go look at her pic?

[already gone.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

Lmao, don't feel bad. I remembered the entry you first commented on (because it was about my Braves making it to the playoffs and I still remember how happy I was) but I had to go back and look at the date. Oct 4th. I was gonna settle for a pumpkin latte but I like your idea better *wink*

And I resent that "bloop buddy" comment. We are also Facebook Buddies and baseball buddies, hmmp. I'm making a pouty face, btw.

[already gone.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

Yeah, Shaun's driving me home.

I'm not exactly sure what Tom's job would be, I know currently he's a heavy equipment desiel mechanic, and this job will have something to do with conveying to mechanics how to repair certain parts. But yeah, he'd be in the headquarters near Detroit too.

[Cuban Vixen|0 likes] [|reply]

Oh goodness I should have never told you about the dream!

You are kinda the man of my dreams for real. Smart, sweet, funny cute and you love baseball. If only I could find a good ol Georgia boy with those qualities I would be okay.

Yeah, you don't want to go walking by yourself. There's a lot of trees and little yapper dogs around my house.

[already gone.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

RYC that is too bad, maybe the next girl you might have a thing with. that sucks i am sorry to hear that.

actually i am NOT running outside, i am running inside, jogging in the one spot its too cold!!!

[The Dreaming Wife |0 likes] [|reply]

as one of the girls that broke your heart I can truly say the worst decision I've made is letting you go but maybe it's for the better I've had six psychotic breaks breaks in eighteen months and that wouldn't have ben fair to you

[Girl_interupted|0 likes] [|reply]

I'm in kansas and anytime works for me

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