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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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lead me to heaven (my poetry response)

03/11/2011

Lead me to heaven p1?
March 11th, 2011
Jonathan

Walking up the stairs to your room
With each step my heart goes boom boom boom
Walking down the hall
Fingers trailing the wall
To your door of ecstasy

Crossing the threshold to heaven
I can smell your perfume, I can smell you
Is this a dream? Is this true
Am I really going to make love to you?

Your small hands are placed on my chest
On my shoulder, your head rests

Holding you in my arms
My body is calm
Running my fingers through your soft hair
I have no fears
Feeling down your back
I almost have a heart attack
No straps in the way
Just a soft nightie on display

Still not a word spoken
I don’t want this spell to be broken
Our lips meet
Wandering hands turn up the heat
Taking my hand
Off to the promise land

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nice!

[Panoramic Prism|0 likes] [|reply]

More more more! Hehe

[»Scarlett's Mommy«|0 likes] [|reply]

:O xx

[BabySteps|0 likes] [|reply]

The :O was like a oooh smiley but Bloop obviously did not recognise it lol Yeah keep going with the poem, your poetry is great and I enjoy reading it xx

[BabySteps|0 likes] [|reply]

I'm not happy for her....not at all.

Yeah, when I saw yesterdays 12-0 win over the Mets I was happy for a moments. If I just keep thinking of April I might be alright.

[already gone.Star|0 likes] [|reply]

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