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What Dreams May Come
by Utter Silence

previous entry: Oh well

next entry: GUESS WHAT!! I'm SO excited

Cherish

01/26/2009

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WhEn PuSh CoMeS tO sHoVe

REVIEW!!!! Yes, yes, I know. ANOTHER poem. Enjoy! ^_^ (once again, all of my poems are on fictionpress.com under the user beyond.time, incase you just so happened to want to comment on there too. )

The glitter the shines,
The gold the glows,
The sun that shimmers
And the heart that snows.

A piece of you for a piece of me,
A strength inside they never see.
Cherish the moments, the memories,
The music your soul sings. Turning your
World upside down.
Take you to a place they’ve never found.
Let the sky rain down and the beasties
Scream. There’s a child in all of us –
Just you wait and see.



- this layout was made by simple layouts.

previous entry: Oh well

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There's more of a rhyme going on here, which seemed to not exactly ruin but put a damper on the Rachee-ness of it. [[please say i just used the word damper right. i'm not sure. it's just such a weird word.]] But anyways.. Yes, I like it. But I don't get the vividness that I did with the other ones.

"A piece of you for a piece of me,
A strength inside they never see." ~ my favorite lines.

[~shinelikestars.|0 likes] [|reply]

I'm sorta commentless here and I don't know if that's good or bad. :/

[Moonsie|0 likes] [|reply]

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