.Fall.Nights.

03/11/2011

You held me close.
I closed my eyes.
My love grew,
In our space that night.

Your weight felt good
Upon my body
We moved slowly
Rocking steady

Your skin dark,
In contrast to mine
You enetered me,
One thrust at a time

Over and over
Penetrating me deep
My heart raced
For you, My sweet

Like no other,
Thats how you take me
Loud moans escaping
No need for faking.

Again and again
Your body to mine
My fingertips grazing
Right down your spine

Digging into you deeper
The harder you grow
I can feel you now
Almost ready to explode

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i like this. can hear your passion in your words.

question: are you going to write more of your story?

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I hear you on that. I've had blocks with my story. went about 4 months with out writing anything. now I'm just editing in hopes that will help trigger the creative juices. If you want to you should try writing down what you want to have happen. That helped me. Oh even if you write down how you see your characters (physically & attiuded wise). When I did that I was able to elaborate more on previous chapters as well as write a whole new chapter. I have it posted on here if you would like to read it.

I like your poetry. You are very good about putting your emotions into your words. If you want check out www.allpoetry.com. Its a good site to shre your writings on. There are contest that has you write based off a picture or sentence or song. I found it helps with a block

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