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Writing is not only in your soul but in your veins
by Written.In.Blood

previous entry: Chapter Three:Merry We Meet Merry We Meet again Love

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11/22/2009



Directory | Where I Get My Charater Names & I Also Go here Too | My Personal Diary




Trying to think of a different Tittle than Who Am I.

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Who Am I? A white American
With Irish and German decent.
What makes me so superior?
What is my proper name for my Color? Am I some harsh name
For someone who is Irish and German
Or am I some harsh name for white folk?

What do other cultures think of me? Some rude American? Some
Yankee? Well story but I don’t
Play baseball or am I am stupid
American?

What do they know about me?
Do they know I’m a little self conscious
That I have dreams
I have the love of music
And without it I’m lost
Do they know I have talents?
That I’m good at writing?
I’m caring and understanding
That I am mostly the unusually accepting person
I love cats and dogs?
They Know NOTHING!

They Just see a White American
And assume I’m
Rude
A dumb Yankee
Who thinks I’m superior than everyone else

Who Am I?




If I took the time to read you, I think it is only respect that you took the time to read me.
&& I REALLY HATE when one just replies to my notes READ something!


I'll Say when something is Graphic or for Mature Audiences Only.




previous entry: Chapter Three:Merry We Meet Merry We Meet again Love

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I think 'Who Am I' fits pretty well... unless you wanted to go with something like your name, which is part of how you define yourself... it's hard. I like the thought behind this.

[Arby's Fiction|0 likes] [|reply]

is it the fact that it jumps around in time? Would it make it easier if i put a date or year on every chapter or is it something else that makes it confusing? and surreal kind of like so fake and fantasy like it is disgusting lol.

[young author|0 likes] [|reply]

Lol sorry I am going to have to say that you are going to have to wait till Friday. I'm at a relatives and I don't have my laptop... give me a hint... is there something wrong with the ending??

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