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The Keystone State
by angellee

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Valley Of The Dolls

02/08/2016

Valley Of The Dolls



I wrote this after suffering
from writer's block.
Good to be back at BLOOP! :-)


Valley Of The Dolls


At night I line up
all my dreams

where it's been
a thousand years
since I was a doll

standing still
on emerald grasses
counting
the platinum stars.

I'm spending
my silver
in valleys of diamond

but inkless tea
is turning
my teeth black

and I can't fathom
this sparkling depth
of insane twilight.

If only I can relinquish
the nectars
of my mythologies

like white lilacs
of pink pearl
banishing demons
from my moonless mind..

but everafter
 doesn't seem possible

when being bled
by bloods
of blank circumstance;

it's much easier
to stare
at the sky

than live
in the rumble
of its thunder.


© slh
January 23, 2016





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I am here. Having a look around. Looks pretty cool at first glance.

[tracker|0 likes] [|reply]

Hello again Tracker! Good to see you here. This site is pretty simple to us if you don't get fancy. And it's a Diary site!
Thanks for stopping by my friend.

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

I too am taking a look around. And yes, I do remember this place, but I thought I looked for it a year or so ago out of curiosity and couldn't find it. But Now I'm checking it out. The Voice Inside.

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Hi Rob ..

As I was telling Tracker, this diary site is pretty simple to use if one doesn't get fancy. I hope you set up a diary. Thanks for stopping by Rob. Hope to write here with you again.

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

ryn: My name at allpoetry is Greta Garbage and here is the link:

http://allpoetry.com/Greta_Garbage

I am now following you

[Greta GarbageStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Checking it out

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I hope you make many, many new friends here at Bloop Diary. It seems like it will be perfect for sharing your poetry because you can decorate. WildRose

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Hello there

[williamthebloody|0 likes] [|reply]

Hello William!! Glad you're here.

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ryc: I'll add you too. I also had an OD back in the day.

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[Ethan JamesStar|0 likes] [|reply]

RYN: Great, looking forward to getting to know you. Hopefully I'll have time to read and comment this weekend.

Sandra

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Hello! Thank you for your note to Tracker about favs. I got that down now. But, still can't get the icon widget to work. Oh, well, I'll get there.

[bonnieR|0 likes] [|reply]

Good stuff

[just delStar|0 likes] [|reply]

RYN: Thanks so much just del. Will look forward to reading your diary. I've added you as a fave. I appreciate you taking the time to read. Will be visiting you soon.

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Hi, yes, I'm Willow Rosenberg from Easydiary!

[Willow|0 likes] [|reply]

Wonderful! I'm so glad you're here Willow. If you're having any issues adding favorites let me know. It's means you're using the "Beta Version of Bloop" and it needs turned off. I had give a few other ED people instructions on adding favs.

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Thanks Sandra, I've messaged them, too. Actually, Dickens is a piece of cake compared to Melville!

[bonnieR|0 likes] [|reply]

You're so very welcomed Bonnie. I'm so glad you joined. And tracker is here too. Now if only we could get zhnee to write here too. I like the quaint atmosphere here. I have a Prosebox too. Busy place there though. Hopefully we'll hear something about adding profile pics soon.

I'll tell my son he's lightweight LOL ..lmao. I always teased him when he complained about reading Dickens. I've always heard Moby Dick is a challenge. One I'm going to have to try if I can ever find the time with writing poetry, working and keeping up on diaries LOL.

[angelleeStar|0 likes] [|reply]

Thanks for the direction about editing. Of course, that is also only on the non-beta version.

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