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Beyond Belief
by A RedSox Fan

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A lady wrote a poem about me

03/10/2011

I was chatting with this blind woman on a gaming site for blind people. A few nights ago we were just playing yatzy with some others and I was being silly, just typing lyrics to songs that popped in my head from what people were saying, for example...
someone wrote "hay now!" and I wrote "hey now, you're an all star get your game on and go play, hey now, you're a rock star get the show on and get paid"
Then this lady started doing it too but it was to groups that I enjoy. One that really shocked me was when she wrote
"Jonathan, you got to cool it now, you're going to lose control"
It's from an RNB group from the 80's from Boston which I dont know why, but I am always supprised when people know who they are. I mean, to me, it's just a group from Boston Ma, and to a lot of other people, New Edition, is known for their top hits such as "candy girl" "cool it now" and "mr telephone man" Later, this group broke up and became even more famous as they all went off and did their own things and all sprung number one hits.
Ralph Tresvant, Jonny Gilll, Bobby brown and "bell biv devoe"

I digress...

So last night we were playing games, just me and her, I showed her a few of my poems. She says she writes poems too. Then she wrote a poem for-about me.

This lady, physically, is my ideal woman. (lol I use that a lot dont I?)
But she is 5-1, "small all around" and has long hair.
That's enough talking, let me show you the poem she wrote for me and you can tell me what you think.

Extacy

I will go where ever you lead
to be in your presents, is what i need.
To feel your warmth, your sweet embrace,
your gentle touch against my face.
Making love to you, making you feel every word,
the sweetest thing you've ever heard.
Showing you through my touch everything i have tried to say,
assuring you it will always be this way.
If you would relax and come with me,
Jonathan I'll take you to extacy...

an original by renae especially written for jonathan

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[Cuban Vixen|0 likes] [|reply]

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Ooh la la!!

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